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Title: ^raven's art
Post by: raven on February 07, 2011, 11:54
My first sig
(http://s2.ifotos.pl/img/lich-v5_hhwhsaw.jpg)

Here comes the second one. Hope u gonna like it

(http://s2.ifotos.pl/img/Ulq_hhsharr.jpg)

3rd

(http://s2.ifotos.pl/img/Jurek-v1_hrparpq.jpg)

4th

(http://s2.ifotos.pl/img/sven-v2_hrxnsnx.png)

5th

(http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/4117/animegj.png)

6th - from sotw #4

(http://img39.imageshack.us/img39/7194/sotw4n.png)

Title: Re: ^raven's art
Post by: Rocka on February 07, 2011, 11:56
cant see it
Title: Re: ^raven's art
Post by: raven on February 07, 2011, 11:58
fixed
Title: Re: ^raven's art
Post by: Mushr00m on February 07, 2011, 11:59
bad quality
Title: Re: ^raven's art
Post by: Boki_ on February 07, 2011, 12:22
bad quality
Title: Re: ^raven's art
Post by: MaNiaC on February 07, 2011, 12:27
For u r 1st sig , Looks Nice ;).
Title: Re: ^raven's art
Post by: dolmel on February 07, 2011, 12:53
aint that bad.
Too much contours, glow, shadows on text layers
Title: Re: ^raven's art
Post by: joyjoy on February 07, 2011, 13:28
good idea with shadows and glow but maybe less of it and some DOF on center will be cool and I dont like the font much some cooler is available for sure but good work nevertheless ;)
Title: Re: ^raven's art
Post by: pace_man on February 07, 2011, 13:59
How can i copy this sig in my account?
Title: Re: ^raven's art
Post by: Boki_ on February 07, 2011, 14:10
How can i copy this sig in my account?
I'm glad to meet you... :P 8)
Title: Re: ^raven's art
Post by: MaNiaC on February 07, 2011, 14:52
Put this link in ur sig

(http://[url=http://s2.ifotos.pl/img/lich-v5_hhwhsaw.jpg]http://s2.ifotos.pl/img/lich-v5_hhwhsaw.jpg[/url])


whit this (http://and at eng) You just have to merge everything together
Title: Re: ^raven's art
Post by: DarkAngel on February 07, 2011, 16:01
try red black contrast, far more powerfull efect
Title: Re: ^raven's art
Post by: Juggernaut99 on February 07, 2011, 17:32
aint that bad.
Too much contours, glow, shadows on text layers
Title: Re: ^raven's art
Post by: raven on February 07, 2011, 17:41
thx for all the comments. I will remember about ur advices in next art.
Title: Re: ^raven's art
Post by: LiLThuG on February 08, 2011, 08:10
not bad for your first signature...Keep making more and you will definitely improve...
Title: Re: ^raven's art
Post by: Natura Sonoris on February 08, 2011, 19:10
Depth - bad ,
fonts (for starters- good) ,
idea - good,
Flow -bad

I cant give you icon because you have b&u already
Title: Re: ^raven's art
Post by: raven on February 10, 2011, 23:51
new sig added
Title: Re: ^raven's art
Post by: Natura Sonoris on February 10, 2011, 23:55
That aint sig Lol :D
Title: Re: ^raven's art
Post by: raven on February 11, 2011, 01:06
cause its 800x400?
Title: Re: ^raven's art
Post by: Natura Sonoris on February 11, 2011, 01:09
Yes
Title: Re: ^raven's art
Post by: raven on February 11, 2011, 11:57
resized
Title: Re: ^raven's art
Post by: joyjoy on February 11, 2011, 13:36
That aint sig Lol :D
cause its 800x400?
Yes
who said that sig have to be in specific res? its some of those international values like meter, kilogram and so on ;D
just interested
Title: Re: ^raven's art
Post by: raven on February 11, 2011, 14:11
That aint sig Lol :D
cause its 800x400?
Yes
who said that sig have to be in specific res? its some of those international values like meter, kilogram and so on ;D
just interested

Dont understeand it either, looks not so good after resize but nvm.
Title: Re: ^raven's art
Post by: Natura Sonoris on February 11, 2011, 16:13
Biggest is 500x 200 standard 400x120 ...

More than that is bad imo
Title: Re: ^raven's art
Post by: raven on February 11, 2011, 16:56
Biggest is 500x 200 standard 400x120 ...

More than that is bad imo

ok nvm. Now what about the sig? :>
Title: Re: ^raven's art
Post by: Natura Sonoris on February 11, 2011, 20:56
Yea i have to comment sigs (sorry i got messed up with that quon riddle about that woman got killed in train)

1.Well font is out of flow (very out) does not stick with rest of signature.
2.I can not see focal point (render) so whole sig flow is bad and no depth (check resorces for depth and flow)
3.I do not what is background .some brush ?

Things you should fix.

1.Use lighter colours (black is very bad for sigs,imo)
2.Fonts - stick them close to focals but not be more visable than focal ,so focal > fonts
2.Depth - i see you are trying t gain it but in bad way. Try duplication render couple times in 3,4 layers ,smudge them and change layer to maybe overlay,color dodge,multiply etc. Smudge from in out so you can get colours from render.

If you have questions be free to PM me :D
Title: Re: ^raven's art
Post by: raven on February 22, 2011, 15:52
background was liquified render with some glow later and blur
Title: Re: ^raven's art
Post by: raven on February 22, 2011, 16:00
added new sig
Title: Re: ^raven's art
Post by: LexMonster on February 22, 2011, 16:40
kewl :D
Title: Re: ^raven's art
Post by: Lorikket on February 22, 2011, 16:47
Compare: Fail, Bigger fail, Raven's signatures :o
Title: Re: ^raven's art
Post by: Natura Sonoris on February 22, 2011, 19:22
added new sig

Flow is way bad...
Title: Re: ^raven's art
Post by: raven on February 28, 2011, 22:13
added new (4th) sig

Edit: if som1 have problem with watching (cant see it) i can reupload - just write
Title: Re: ^raven's art
Post by: ¶ÑÇƦ€Ƿ¦ßŁΞ on February 28, 2011, 22:21
Now, that sven looks so nice, it seems Dolmel show you some tricks;)
Title: Re: ^raven's art
Post by: raven on February 28, 2011, 22:25
i tried to copy his idea from sotw and it wasnt hard at all :>
Title: Re: ^raven's art
Post by: Natura Sonoris on February 28, 2011, 22:32
Better sigs now
Title: Re: ^raven's art
Post by: raven on February 28, 2011, 22:36
Better sigs now

wow xd i was waiting for ,, bad flow" 4th time xdxdxd
Title: Re: ^raven's art
Post by: Mushr00m on February 28, 2011, 22:56
nice work, try other fonts and all will be ok  ;)
Title: Re: ^raven's art
Post by: Rocka on February 28, 2011, 22:58
Could you start uploading with www.imageshack.us (http://www.imageshack.us)  ?
I am never able to see your works.
Title: Re: ^raven's art
Post by: Mushr00m on February 28, 2011, 22:59
lulz, i see all of his works
y, imageshack RULES  ;D

EDIT: use Mozilla Firefox and u will see all pictures,videos etc. (chrome s*cks)
Title: Re: ^raven's art
Post by: raven on February 28, 2011, 23:05
reup on imageshack:

(http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/5228/svenv2.png)

Title: Re: ^raven's art
Post by: Natura Sonoris on February 28, 2011, 23:06
It is bad flow and depth :D but it seems none wnats my comments ,just what i say u cant get it
Title: Re: ^raven's art
Post by: Rocka on March 01, 2011, 14:34
the pop out is good, but I don't really like the background
Title: Re: ^raven's art
Post by: raven on March 27, 2011, 15:20
Added new sig!

(http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/4117/animegj.png)
Title: Re: ^raven's art
Post by: Rocka on March 27, 2011, 15:22
nice
Title: Re: ^raven's art
Post by: Natura Sonoris on March 27, 2011, 15:36
Added new sig!

(http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/4117/animegj.png)

Solid one :)

Just you used too much blur ( blur needs to be very in small amounts because it is always better to have nice clear signature) .

Also your left side of render is not fit with background but down left corner is very good (where hand is)

Fair usage of c4d but it does not go  with background (only color is good)

Try this :

Start making your own backgrounds and dont use blur on stock images to make them ,use brushes and smudge and different layer adjustments and try to pick all colors from render. Than use c4d which you find best and use it but it needs to be in flow with background.

If something is not clear be free to ask. I use too much terms when i explain :S

Title: Re: ^raven's art
Post by: raven on March 28, 2011, 15:05
Sig from sotw #4

(http://img39.imageshack.us/img39/7194/sotw4n.png)
Title: Re: ^raven's art
Post by: LexMonster on March 28, 2011, 15:14
u should put sven in sotw, not that girl!
sven rulez ;)
Title: Re: ^raven's art
Post by: dolmel on March 28, 2011, 15:25
Added new sig!

(http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/4117/animegj.png)



dolmel's style  8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8)

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Title: Re: ^raven's art
Post by: raven on March 28, 2011, 15:26
Added new sig!

(http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/4117/animegj.png)



dolmel's style  8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8)

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HELL NO! Go spam SVINJA'S topic troll xd
Title: Re: ^raven's art
Post by: Natura Sonoris on March 28, 2011, 15:41
Nononononoon :S
Title: Re: ^raven's art
Post by: dRagoLjuB on March 28, 2011, 15:45
u should put sven in sotw, not that girl!
sven rulez ;)
there is/was a rule like
you are not allowed to post a pic in sotw which you alrdy posted
...
Title: Re: ^raven's art
Post by: iErnesto94 on July 29, 2013, 04:14
Dear GFX User
Because we will RELAUNCH our ladder soon and to make sure we add all points you deserve and dont forget everything, we will LOCK Every showroom!

So what do you have to do?
 - Make sure you have EACH signature or work you made saved on your computer.
 - When the New showroom section is open, open a new topic for your showroom.
 - Add all signatures/works you want to be judged at for the ladder.
 - Once you've added everything, PM me and I will judge your works(with another gfx mod).
 - We will post the amount of points you will get at that point for your showroom.

That's all for now, if you have ANY questions feel free to ask them in this topic!

Thanks in advance,
GFX Team
!Locked