Dont be hard with him guys lol just kidin'
Try to use so zoom at the same time as the music goes "hard", or just when a beat comes. Like at the beggining with phoenix when he sends the birds to panda and kills gyro too, try to zoom on them (birds, panda and gyro) in black&white and them finish with the end withou the zoom. Try to watch some wodota top 10 week vid (you can find them on youko.com too) or w200 who does very cool vids (but with night^^stalker in lol).
You can do that in all scenes like in the bear one, you did a really naughty transition between xD
And try to not cut the video like that, the music stops sudently (lancer's scene). (hope you understand all the bullshit I just said xD english skillz ftw!)
But there are good points: as your first vid, it's not bad, you added the hp bars that was cool

and i liked the intro and end you did. grats
But you already know, The practice makes perfect.
keep going