this time better
but try not to over do your FX intro
the fire burn is quite ok but if you are able to do some shadows clapping on the text it would be cool or maybe just use that wave and text font could be better or make some in PS that got cool depth or any style
and optical lenses are too much here its looking quite strange and artificial, easy fast move, if you wanna to keep them do something better with them, some different move same like that intro wave, horizontal, keep same style and if its meant to be super like hell, use red color, on blue its different mode and style at all
as for edit its ok, some scenes that show something but not all, if you have some time, you can do on this music quite creepy or thrilling atm. using some shots that are not obvous, you dont show kill only try or some cool angles on heroes waiting on enemy
if you do that imo it will be pretty good
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