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Offline Jingle^Balls

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Intro for my movie
« on: June 11, 2011, 10:18 »
Here is my trial intro for Dota Movie. If any1 have any sugestion feel free to post it here... And i know movie name suck, probably  i ll change it :)...
And something else i am beginer in AAE CS4 :)....
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Re: Intro for my movie
« Reply #1 on: June 11, 2011, 10:35 »
No offence, but it sucks.
As I see, you tried to do something like this ?
This is my first after effects intro, so ofc it's a little blury.

HF.
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Re: Intro for my movie
« Reply #2 on: June 11, 2011, 10:40 »
Too long + No music + Game Over in intro??? = DISLIKE
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Re: Intro for my movie
« Reply #3 on: June 11, 2011, 10:50 »
Maybe reduce it from 1 min to lower?
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Re: Intro for my movie
« Reply #4 on: June 11, 2011, 12:46 »
It's nice but you should add some music and reduce the duration of the video.
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Re: Intro for my movie
« Reply #5 on: June 11, 2011, 14:30 »
As i said its just trial intro.. it should look like that and i ll edit it more... ofc i ll put some music there :)...
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Re: Intro for my movie
« Reply #6 on: June 11, 2011, 14:45 »
it should go from thouse 1 min to 15 sec :S its just kinda way too slow. and i didnt have the nerves to watch it till end...
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Re: Intro for my movie
« Reply #7 on: June 11, 2011, 17:03 »
Quote from: pyroftw1234 on June 11, 2011, 14:45
it should go from thouse 1 min to 15 sec :S its just kinda way too slow. and i didnt have the nerves to watch it till end...
True, tnx for sugestion guys...  it should be ~30 sec long...
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Re: Intro for my movie
« Reply #8 on: June 11, 2011, 17:33 »
Andrew rocks, doesnt he, guys? :D
its too slow just shrink keyframes to shorter duration will be enough to make it faster and smoother feeling, and try use simple camera more then like this, put titles more in x,y,z space so camera rotates and flies more, even double spin will be cool, about fractal noise, its just by AK, try make your own, it got many settings and if you try and play with them you reach some awsome graphic  ;) particles if used well are nice too but the stars are not so good try to decrease size of them or set it on another shape just spheres with DOF and then put glowing FX on that layer
but I know you started so good luck and play with it and you find many super things in it ;)
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Re: Intro for my movie
« Reply #9 on: June 11, 2011, 17:53 »
Yea Andrew rock, but i must learn from somewhere xD... I followed his steps and made this with few changes cuz i dont like originial animation... Since i start to work with AAE 1-2 weeks ago this is good... And I like those stars, maybe i just need to decrease birth rate a litle bit, from 1 to 0.4 and it should be nice now... Also I decreased video time to 40sec not to 30 cuz i ll add some new text here :)...
Tnx for sugestion.
Best Regards
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Re: Intro for my movie
« Reply #10 on: June 12, 2011, 10:56 »
Good luck with your movie!
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Re: Intro for my movie
« Reply #11 on: June 12, 2011, 11:23 »
tnx mate :)
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